Tuesday, November 18, 2008

genre heart ache

a brooding demi
takes well in small doses

to the breaking habbits
to the fickle measures

of a bored Canadian man
in a raised collar



she escapes the dimensions of her portrait
leaves the wall behind

-the frame and distances of light-

to betray your fantasy
the export of lust on a canvas built for two

1 comment:

S.L. Corsua said...

she escapes the dimensions of her portrait
leaves the wall behind


Yes, I can see those lines 'in action' -- complementary to the photo of the painting on the wall.

I've also much enjoyed reading the poems "to address" (great compression here) and "decorative fruit." Your wordplay is impressive.

Cheers.