WOW! The imagery is staggering! Excellent free verse! Everything just flows so perfectly with a grand ending. "taking each seed home in separate pouches that we traded for rifles and fishing hooks" - WOW! I'm just so WOWed from this poem, I'm at a loss of words. Imagine that! No words can better describe this poem then the words you used to create it.
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WOW! The imagery is staggering! Excellent free verse! Everything just flows so perfectly with a grand ending. "taking each seed home in separate pouches
that we traded for rifles and fishing hooks" - WOW! I'm just so WOWed from this poem, I'm at a loss of words. Imagine that! No words can better describe this poem then the words you used to create it.
Luscious! I love the first line...
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