By the time I get to the 12th line I can't read it. :) It's the word "with." How about "histories [as] lovers"?
I click publish and now there is a change. ahah. "Vigor." I liked "in fits," personally.
Or I could just read it outloud, to see if it's just in my head. But I can't at the moment...
histories as lovers and in fits.
LOL.. watch out.. that Hay(Na)Ku stuff is addictive!
no kidding glenn, i keep thinking peotry in six words.
svwaa is the verification word. blue and squggly. i couldn't resist sharing it.
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By the time I get to the 12th line I can't read it. :) It's the word "with." How about "histories [as] lovers"?
I click publish and now there is a change. ahah. "Vigor." I liked "in fits," personally.
Or I could just read it outloud, to see if it's just in my head. But I can't at the moment...
histories as lovers and in fits.
LOL.. watch out.. that Hay(Na)Ku stuff is addictive!
no kidding glenn, i keep thinking peotry in six words.
svwaa is the verification word. blue and squggly. i couldn't resist sharing it.
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