Friday, March 10, 2006

promises; promises:

i

one mountain           under
                              river beds and pebbles

crease the man's spine
     with the grace of an

                                   un-polished
                              fingernail



ii

she pierces                with fat
                              tongue
the rhythm of
his potency                before

          a promise is broken




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3 comments:

Brian Boutwell said...

Title:

Under and Pierces

*insert roman numeral poem one*

*insert roman numeral poem two*

katy said...

must give brian lots of credit for taking advantage of my tired state, suggesting spaces and numbers and a new title; fore, this piece is now living a second kind of life. poems cocoon and burst. thank you super mucho brian amigo for playing.

Brian Boutwell said...

welcome.