Friday, April 01, 2016

--REFORMERS--

IMPROMPTU #1
with the Found Poetry Review for National Poetry Month

the prompt:

 
 

the pages:
 
 
the remainders:
work done is by master. eleven were in on the government. according to the mechanic undergoing storm assembling. complete steam undergoing repairs and work and work and two and thirty-two repairs machinery. found all the coal approximately. making consumption. all used for the power. at the three men, one man, each man acting. were during making the consumption total water. to which chargeable. consumption, adjustment, attention, the end. adjustment, the attention, which the government of the occasion of country. enough has to end in view, the three big indicated in this. and need is this and need as now the whole is necessary as to quick unhealthy. healthy if the interests changes are going change. country government will be through the community. some will be merely the methods. minds need and goods we keep. heads and these things in a little army. the task of everybody out by labor four asked the government the sum. press principle in the construction for construction for operation. for made in construction the dock state. France sailed from France the two other. the battleship and five peace of powers is remains until in and terms to second this determination to press the past will wagon. funds for operation a necessary expenditure for the country. line is as a remedy for the slow when the refund to consequence expiration of the resolution without excuse is urged to present aid. to secure government, government between a necessary and improving condition based on that than any to know wagon and government. bad and by during stormy November. cleared in the week.
 
the poem:
work done well is by a master.
 
eleven were in on the government. according to the mechanic --
which is undergoing stormproof assembling.
 
complete. reformers steam ahead. undergoing repairs
and work and work and work and work and two and thirty-two repairs --
 
machinery work. or so they found all the coal --
approximately.
 
making consumption for government. all used for the power.
at the three men, one man, each man acting.
 
as if power were working.
were making the consumption total.
 
to which the men are chargeable.
consumption, adjustment, attention, --
 
the end. adjustment, the attention,
unto which the government  --
 
of the occasion of country
is enough  and has the end in view.
 
the three big indications in this.
is this and need  --
 
as now the whole is necessary
as to quick unhealthy.
 
healthy if the interests of men
change and are going to change for good.
 
country government will be through the community.
some men will be merely become the methods.
 
government minds need --
and goods men keep.
 
heads and these things --
as in a little army -- these are the tasks of everybody --
 
out by labor.
 
four asked the government
the sum. press principle --
 
in the construction for construction
for operation. for made in construction --
 
the dock state of France
sailed from France to the two others.
 
the battleship and five peace of powers
remains until --
 
in and of terms to second this determination
to press the past will of men like a wagon.
 
funds for operation are a necessary expenditure --
 
for the country. line is as a remedy  --
for the slow when the refund to consequence expiration --
 
of the resolution without excuse
is urged to present aid.
 
to secure government,
government between a necessary and improving --
condition
 
based on that which more than any
to know the will of men as if by wagon --
 
and government.
bad and by doing so during a stormy November.
 
but cleared in the week.
 
the notes:
upon lifitng the text, i inserted my own punctuation, namely the period. in the manifestation of the text as a poem, words were added to benefit the narrative, and breaks were added to benefit the breath. as this is my first erasure piece, and outside my comfort zone, as it were, i brought the content into familiarity via couplets, of which i am very comfortable.
 
 

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