Thursday, September 28, 2006

tongue & cheek

we compare the colour of our tongues
after the juices from ice pops
stain them

or

let's compare the colour of our tongues
once the juices from ice pops
have stained them

or

give me an excuse
to ask to see your tongue

9 comments:

  1. or
    I'll show you mine
    if...

    Made me smile
    Glenn

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  2. Seems like a bunch of tongue waggery
    colored tongue waggery that is.
    This one brought a smile to my face also.
    Thank you.

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  3. Gotta love short poems, or statements, or anything really, about tongues. :) Very fun read.

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  4. Cute, and sounds strangely familar. I like your poetry.

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  5. mmmm... tongues. mmmm... ice pops.
    Me likes.
    This was great fun.

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  6. this post made me sad :(


    xoxo

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  7. aww c.s. don't be sad. *sticks out her tongue* see, it's blue. what color is yours?

    glenn, ozy my man, yasmin my lady, mike, don, and dear face, thank you all for the happy faces and kind words!!

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