tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post114641115644194719..comments2023-08-13T08:56:47.540-04:00Comments on something katy: silkkatyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1146931668936002912006-05-06T12:07:00.000-04:002006-05-06T12:07:00.000-04:00Hmm, your voice is definitely changing... Yes, the...Hmm, your voice is definitely changing... Yes, the last line is spectacular!arch.memoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13902709126678545260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1146481856288846402006-05-01T07:10:00.000-04:002006-05-01T07:10:00.000-04:00thank you hardy!thank you hardy!katyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1146459498512764572006-05-01T00:58:00.000-04:002006-05-01T00:58:00.000-04:00that last line is so fine. sugar moss and bears' ...that last line is so fine. sugar moss and bears' feet...great. the poem has such good concrete images it distracts me from words like wonder and while and understood and better. <BR/>good as a last read before bed, no doubt.hardyfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11124836171083026130noreply@blogger.com