Wednesday, September 20, 2006

a little hallelujah

or is she holding your hand because she wants to?


a meager sweatshirt
with hood solves nothing

in a monsoon
of sideways rain.

the trees beg
for your shelter

though you hide
under them.

a shiver prompted you
to hold her closer

to hold her hands
in yours.

but you wonder,
is she compliant

because of the cold
or...

3 comments:

  1. I'm glad to see that you're still finding the time to write with your new schedule!

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  2. This kinda reminds me of that "Turtles" song..."Busstop" I think it is.
    I like yours better though (nothing personal against the Turtles) as yours has an air of mystery to it. It is familiar to manhy a life experience of mine. Does she actually like me? Or is there an alterior motive? (like keeping warm or being drunk off her ass or some such...)

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