Wednesday, May 24, 2006

はい(な) く

hitting
each other's
backs with sticks

biting
each other's
lips in fits

understanding
each other's
ideas with ease

remembering
each other's
histories as lovers










the title of this post is in hirigana
what is hay(na)ku?
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7 comments:

  1. B BoutwellMay 24, 2006 3:42 PM

    By the time I get to the 12th line I can't read it. :) It's the word "with." How about "histories [as] lovers"?

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  2. B BoutwellMay 24, 2006 3:43 PM

    I click publish and now there is a change. ahah. "Vigor." I liked "in fits," personally.

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  3. B BoutwellMay 24, 2006 3:45 PM

    Or I could just read it outloud, to see if it's just in my head. But I can't at the moment...

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  4. katyMay 24, 2006 4:22 PM

    histories as lovers and in fits.

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  5. Crunchy WetaMay 24, 2006 5:56 PM

    LOL.. watch out.. that Hay(Na)Ku stuff is addictive!

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  6. katyMay 24, 2006 6:13 PM

    no kidding glenn, i keep thinking peotry in six words.

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  7. katyMay 24, 2006 7:16 PM

    svwaa is the verification word. blue and squggly. i couldn't resist sharing it.

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