tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post113951102765024227..comments2023-08-13T08:56:47.540-04:00Comments on something katy: the giverkatyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1139583067970368702006-02-10T09:51:00.000-05:002006-02-10T09:51:00.000-05:00oh wrong poem with smelled, i thought i'd written ...oh wrong poem with smelled, i thought i'd written smelt... actually that might have been in a draft. <BR/>will fix it. thank you again, brian.katyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1139582918915468002006-02-10T09:48:00.000-05:002006-02-10T09:48:00.000-05:00it's not a typo, it's a mistake in tense. thanks ...it's not a typo, it's a mistake in tense. thanks for pointing it out though, editor. and yeah, you did tell me you liked it.katyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1139582652136801402006-02-10T09:44:00.000-05:002006-02-10T09:44:00.000-05:00Typo: smelled. I think I told you I liked it right...Typo: smelled. I think I told you I liked it right?B Boutwellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522917621462043793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1139546160535923512006-02-09T23:36:00.000-05:002006-02-09T23:36:00.000-05:00Ouch! (Very good ouch.) Very Marie Howe, in a way....Ouch! (Very good ouch.) Very Marie Howe, in a way. That making dinner and stabbing you in the stomach thing. Except very erotic. And very delicate (i.e. Katy). <BR/>(I think that is definitely your word: delicate.)arch.memoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13902709126678545260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12354210.post-1139517501944173592006-02-09T15:38:00.000-05:002006-02-09T15:38:00.000-05:00i nearly choked reading your comment, enriko... so...i nearly choked reading your comment, enriko... soda and "this poem is wanton soup" is the perfect combination for "fizz-inhilation".<BR/><BR/>i'm glad you like it, i wrote it just for you, what with you asking so nicely in the comments from the previous poem and all.katyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07329161994664435636noreply@blogger.com